Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in The 6th World

Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I have read so far, World Building: So far the world-building is fine especially with other dimension concept or the parallel world which is an interesting one. But sorry to say this, I think the world building need more description, lore and showing of the environment to make it more interesting to explore and read especially with the parallel world that is the main attraction of the story itself. Character: So far I do really like the character design because it's actually okay for their description and the appearance such as hair, the author describe quite well. However and this is my personal nitpicky opinion, I think you can put a lot of detail with the character design especially on clothing. As for the main character, she is alright based on what I read, but I do believe the author will give her an interesting development for her journey as well as the side character. Overall, this is quite a unique concept in Webnovel and I believe the writing is okay I guess, but I believe the author can improve it better in futures. Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!