Review Detail of jdbeue in The Alpha's Return

Item: The Alpha's Return
Rating: 5

Review detail

jdbeueAuthor2yrjdbeue

Author Here. This novel is a new take on the classic werewolf genre. Do consider trying this out. If you have any suggestions, please do voice them, as they help me improve my writing style.

The Alpha's Return

jdbeue

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TmiiLv13Tmii

Meh didn’t Like the novel feels like everyone trynna suppress the Mc even himself staying around humans made him weak clearly I would of preferred A Ruthless werewolf who don’t Care about anything like his past self seems way more interesting I also don’t Like the fact that he himself cares so much for innocents getting hurt like he’s A hero or something Idk maybe I’m Just too much a cold person myself I prefer edgy villains in front of true power everything else is irrelevant

2yr

Dominic_ZibudaLv4Dominic_Zibuda

Btw, there are no "Alpha" only parents. That is just something we made up, If there was A social hierarchy such as that then that would imply constant Internal strife. There is a commander wolf, but it is just the oldest wolf in the pack, Also, all wolves in a pack are related by blood

2yr

Matt_pikeLv5Matt_pike

2 things will there be romance and in the synopsis it said You weren’t going to follow canon does that mean this is a fan-fic or something else?

2yr

jdbeueAuthorjdbeue

no romance as of yet, and it won't follow generally approved werewolf origins completely

Matt_pike:2 things will there be romance and in the synopsis it said You weren’t going to follow canon does that mean this is a fan-fic or something else?

2yr

Matt_pikeLv5Matt_pike

Oh ok thx

jdbeue:no romance as of yet, and it won't follow generally approved werewolf origins completely

2yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

harem?

jdbeue:no romance as of yet, and it won't follow generally approved werewolf origins completely

2yr

jdbeueAuthorjdbeue

nope...

ProfessorofCulture:harem?

2yr

ParagonofsinLv1Paragonofsin

Who’s the girl in the cover? Fml?

jdbeue:nope...

2yr

ParagonofsinLv1Paragonofsin

Thank god it’s not a harem. Thank you author

jdbeue:nope...

2yr

MonarchofchaosLv2Monarchofchaos

Whos the girl on the cover btw. will sHe be the future fml

jdbeue:nope...

2yr

Pira_StarbornLv11Pira_Starborn

is there a comic version

2yr

MrIIIoLv5MrIIIo

Whats the cover?

2yr

AeserLv5Aeser

Will he be alone in his battles? Or does this have kingdom building and armies?

2yr

Gill_XDLv14Gill_XD

wait up cannon, so it's a fanfic but I never heard of the story, from where does it take from ?

2yr

jdbeueAuthorjdbeue

not exactly... I mean that it will not follow all the myth precisely, like how werewolves behave and what powers they have

Gill_XD:wait up cannon, so it's a fanfic but I never heard of the story, from where does it take from ?

2yr

Gill_XDLv14Gill_XD

I see no wonder, nice well werewolf lore is so diverse theirs no real legend that can be considered the truth, this story is amazing thought 👏

jdbeue:not exactly... I mean that it will not follow all the myth precisely, like how werewolves behave and what powers they have

2yr

ArcheleausLv3Archeleaus

what do you mean in your sinopsis “canon” is this a fanfic?

2yr

jdbeueAuthorjdbeue

by canon i mean general mythology ... this is not a fanfic

Archeleaus:what do you mean in your sinopsis “canon” is this a fanfic?

2yr

ArcheleausLv3Archeleaus

a thanks mate il go read it now

jdbeue:by canon i mean general mythology ... this is not a fanfic

2yr

CasualDegenerateLv3CasualDegenerate

Thank you although it wouldn’t t make sense with peoples thoughts of wolves and all that stuff with the genre usually with one mate so it wont make sense for a harem anyways bout to binge the novel

jdbeue:nope...

2yr