Review Detail of MMA_SirOwlbie in Reincarnated as a World

Above-average idea, below-average writing. Lots of potential, but the writer clearly needs a ton more practice before being able to pull of what he wants; as it is, the style is inconsistent, sentences are often repetitive, and the descriptions, details, world-building and so forth are done in an odd, jarring manner. The only reason the WQ gets 2 stars is because I've seen far worse on this site. Great idea, though.