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loved it up to roughly chapter 60 upon where the chapters start getting shorter and shorter with lots happening in between chapters that we weren't told, like the author gives up on the chapter halfway through and moves onto the next one. I loved the idea of a brewing system but even at the end there were only 3 different types of alcohols. I'm slightly disappointed as I feel this story had much potential to grow into a webnovel akin to say The legendary Mechanic or My Vampire System. I hope someone takes this concept and transforms it from a gem that was roughly cut into a cut and polished gem mounted into the most beautiful jewellery. names and numbers are also inconsistent and there were large amounts of missed opportunities. if anyone does make a spin-off version, inform me immediately

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Tavern in Another Dimension:Getting the Elf Queen Drunk at the Start

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