Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in You gained 15 EXP!

The story is solid, the world-building is respectable, and it is an easy read. One thing that I would change is adding more visual description. Visual description entails what the characters look like and the environment does. If I'm reading a story about mechs and with a lot of cool technology then I want to be able to visualize the scene. I wish you the best on your future endeavors author. Keep in mind we all have different values, Feel free to check out my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey."