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Rating: 4.8

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Sunny_Shad0wLv122yrSunny_Shad0w

Though there is only two chapters, I'm sure you can do better. What's really confusing me though is the absence of quotations. Usually, in dialogue, quotations were used to separate dialogue from the narrative. If you can do that, I'm sure this would be a great story. That is the only flaw I have as of now. You can do it!

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mrant12

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mrant12Authormrant12

Hi, thanks for the review. The author is currently alone now, and its all monologue. It's also a first person writing style so it's kind of weird if I put quotations everywhere :)

2yr

mrant12Authormrant12

Hellooo, this novel is being republished under The Undying Mecha Emperor. I will be dropping all 110 Chapters on the 1st of July in the Privilege section. Hope to see you there! :D

1yr