Sunny_Shad0w
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Arc 2 --> Arc 1 --> Arc 3 I am a writer who goes against the trend and paves an original path in my creations. (Unfortunately, I have a life outside of writing.)The parents are NOT dead.
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Sunny_Shad0w11mthReplied to Cerebellum76Thank you again for your understanding. Writing takes time, effort, and skill. I hope that I can reach to the point of finishing Arc 2 and commence the editing process of Arc 1. However, one can only hope to see that happen. Thank you for your understanding and patience. And thank you and all my readers for keeping your collections. The story will get good. It takes time.
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Arc 2 Outfit: (Keep note, this outfit for her is NOT permanent, and will revert to its original one in Arc IV)
Aletha Adtraic: The Second Eldest of The Adtraic Family. Throughout most of her life, Aletha was always recognized as The Detector of truth. This title can be misleading, as despite her power, Aletha is the complete opposite of who you would expect a truth-giver to be. Most of the time, Aletha is cheerful, energetic, and playful, but in certain moments, much like her brother, she could be quite serious sometimes, especially regarding her family. Her tricksy, teasing, and mischievous personality can blend well into certain situations, bringing light into dark atmospheres, or fetching and unleashing chaotic elements around discussions and events. But despite her childish personality, in serious times, Aletha can be caring, remorseful, and observant to others. Aletha retains a detestation of literature, and focuses more on the aspects of Art, Illustration, and Creativity. She even has a vast, complex, and strong imagination in comparison to her brother. There is another unique ability Aletha holds that Asahi does not, and that is the power to sometimes, bring her ideas to life. No one, not even her knows how or why she possesses this ability, yet she still takes advantage of it no matter the costs. Much like Asahi, Aletha, too, cares more for their family than anything or anyone else. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommented
Arc 2 Outfit: (After Chapter 118: Inhuman)
Asahi Adtraic: The Eldest sibling of The Adtraic Family. Throughout most of his life, Asahi was always considered to be The Bringer of Hope. His sophisticated thought processes are what shine the light on the darkness of despair, bringing light and faith inside to everyone he interacts with. Most of the time, Asahi carries the traits of charisma, gentleness, and high-mindedness, but also bravery, sophistication, and responsibility. There are instances where he gets invested into literature, trying to make his own way of speaking, so that he too can help others in need. Ironically, Asahi can sometimes be short-tempered if he doesn't get his way, or that one of his solutions has failed. But the truth of the matter is that Asahi's personality is complex and can vary from one situation to another. For most of the part, he's forgiving, curious, and holds his own responsibilities, but in other situations, he can be selfish, boastful, and problematic, ESPECIALLY if it involves his family. In his mindset, he believes that everyone has a chance to become important and that there will always be dawn; even in the darkest moments, but not all much the same for him. There is one thing he cares about more than his world and that is his family. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedNarcissa: She is the current Queen of Pladtioa. She is a snarky and selfish individual who has a breath-taking appearance. She takes no heed to a disaster anywhere else from Pladtioa. Her mindset is beyond corrupted from the past, believing that everything that classifies as 'disgusting' to her will perish under her dark mocha flames. Narcissa only wants one thing in her life, to clear her mind from the corruption and calamities in the past. But soon she will find out, that her past may be the key to her future.
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Love the concept, descriptions, and plot. There are a few flaws and errors, but I' sure with enough devotion and commitment, those will be tweaked. Other than that, I find the concept of this novel amusing and interesting. Good job!
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Please use the correct version of you're! You're = You are Your = Something of possession of someone. Thank you. ^_^
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The Princess: A forgotten goddess that orders a hidden, deceptive dominion recognized as The Ending, who also shares the face of a familiar individual. She is the almighty supreme ruler of the eighth nation, and is beyond overpowered in comparison to everyone and everything else in Gincad; yet she hardly uses her powers in contradiction to not letting the corruption envelop her fully. Deep inside her tattered corrupted soul are potent principles of Magic, Destruction, Manipulation, and Strength that can manifest in every possible form. She is one of the few that have memory and knowledge of everything in The World of Gincad, including erudition beyond the first incarnation, and her overpowering mastery of leadership. Though none knows of her true motives, one thing can be made clear from her uncharitable behavior; she has absolutely no care for the fate of this world. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommented
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Toivo: He is a built, wise, intelligent, charismatic, healthy old man with blue hair and sharp gunmetal eyes. This man is the owner of a beautiful mansion resting within an area encircled by lush green hills in the joyful nation of Linuxinia. Although he may be aggressive at some moments, he only does it if he feels that he has failed someone. His mindset is to never allow anyone to fail, no matter how much they try. He has years of experience teaching children and young teenagers to become strong, independent, magic-wielding people… but his methods of education… are rather… strange and relentless. Although his identification remains unknown to the world, Toivo had a great, expansive history in his younger days. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrReplied to Sunny_Shad0w
Concept design.
Kendra: She is a pretty, and attractive, powder-blue-haired maid who was born on the twisted lands of Destia. For now, she serves under the order of her master, Toivo, whom she respected after she was found in the wastelands in-between Obrus. This was only because the methods of her water magic were ceased with the reason that her magic was connected to her brothers and cousins. When they tried to flee their nation because of The Queen of Destia's peculiar and absolutely DANGEROUS ways, the moment that their feet touched the brittle and tropical, scorching farmlands of Obrus, the poor girl watched as all her brothers, sisters, and cousins were shot from the gun-powder contraptions known as guns from an evil clan. She was weak, powerless without her family, but when she thought it was all over, she was saved by a man named Toivo, who offered her a better life. Now, she is happy to work and help others, while simultaneously keeping the burden of fate in her. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrReplied to Sunny_Shad0w
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Kendra: She is a pretty, and attractive, powder-blue-haired maid who was born on the twisted lands of Destia. For now, she serves under the order of her master, Toivo, whom she respected after she was found in the wastelands in-between Obrus. This was only because the methods of her water magic were ceased with the reason that her magic was connected to her brothers and cousins. When they tried to flee their nation because of The Queen of Destia's peculiar and absolutely DANGEROUS ways, the moment that their feet touched the brittle and tropical, scorching farmlands of Obrus, the poor girl watched as all her brothers, sisters, and cousins were shot from the gun-powder contraptions known as guns from an evil clan. She was weak, powerless without her family, but when she thought it was all over, she was saved by a man named Toivo, who offered her a better life. Now, she is happy to work and help others, while simultaneously keeping the burden of fate in her. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrReplied to Sunny_Shad0w
Tied-Up hair.
Kendra: She is a pretty, and attractive, powder-blue-haired maid who was born on the twisted lands of Destia. For now, she serves under the order of her master, Toivo, whom she respected after she was found in the wastelands in-between Obrus. This was only because the methods of her water magic were ceased with the reason that her magic was connected to her brothers and cousins. When they tried to flee their nation because of The Queen of Destia's peculiar and absolutely DANGEROUS ways, the moment that their feet touched the brittle and tropical, scorching farmlands of Obrus, the poor girl watched as all her brothers, sisters, and cousins were shot from the gun-powder contraptions known as guns from an evil clan. She was weak, powerless without her family, but when she thought it was all over, she was saved by a man named Toivo, who offered her a better life. Now, she is happy to work and help others, while simultaneously keeping the burden of fate in her. - Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedKendra: She is a pretty, and attractive, powder-blue-haired maid who was born on the twisted lands of Destia. For now, she serves under the order of her master, Toivo, whom she respected after she was found in the wastelands in-between Obrus. This was only because the methods of her water magic were ceased with the reason that her magic was connected to her brothers and cousins. When they tried to flee their nation because of The Queen of Destia's peculiar and absolutely DANGEROUS ways, the moment that their feet touched the brittle and tropical, scorching farmlands of Obrus, the poor girl watched as all her brothers, sisters, and cousins were shot from the gun-powder contraptions known as guns from an evil clan. She was weak, powerless without her family, but when she thought it was all over, she was saved by a man named Toivo, who offered her a better life. Now, she is happy to work and help others, while simultaneously keeping the burden of fate in her.
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedKendra: She is a pretty, and attractive, powder-blue-haired maid who was born on the twisted lands of Destia. For now, she serves under the order of her master, Toivo, whom she respected after she was found in the wastelands in-between Obrus. This was only because the methods of her water magic were ceased with the reason that her magic was connected to her brothers and cousins. When they tried to flee their nation because of The Queen of Destia's peculiar and absolutely DANGEROUS ways, the moment that their feet touched the brittle and tropical, scorching farmlands of Obrus, the poor girl watched as all her brothers, sisters, and cousins were shot from the gun-powder contraptions known as guns from an evil clan. She was weak, powerless without her family, but when she thought it was all over, she was saved by a man named Toivo, who offered her a better life. Now, she is happy to work and help others, while simultaneously keeping the burden of fate in her.
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedAmes Adtraic and Athenia Adtraic: These two animals are Asahi and Aletha's given pets at birth from the Adtraic Parents that serve as their guardians for all the trouble they face. Ames is a wise, perceptive pretty dark kitten, serving as almost a mirror personality from his actual owner. Athenia is an intelligent, sneaky serpent who has a keen eye for almost anything and the truth about everyone and things. These two pets were given material forms so that they would follow Asahi and Aletha everywhere they went if they were in danger. However, due to the Calamity, all Ames and Athenia's powers were removed and they now only serve as pieces of 'attire' for the two siblings… until they return strong enough to awaken again. (Athenia: Four White Buttons, Ames: Dark Black and Brown, white spot-covered Furry Object)
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedAmes Adtraic and Athenia Adtraic: These two animals are Asahi and Aletha's given pets at birth from the Adtraic Parents that serve as their guardians for all the trouble they face. Ames is a wise, perceptive pretty dark kitten, serving as almost a mirror personality from his actual owner. Athenia is an intelligent, sneaky serpent who has a keen eye for almost anything and the truth about everyone and things. These two pets were given material forms so that they would follow Asahi and Aletha everywhere they went if they were in danger. However, due to the Calamity, all Ames and Athenia's powers were removed and they now only serve as pieces of 'attire' for the two siblings… until they return strong enough to awaken again. (Athenia: Four White Buttons, Ames: Dark Black and Brown, white spot-covered Furry Object)
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedAcheros Adtraic: ??? (To be determined)
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommentedAchlys Adtraic: ??? (To be determined)
- Sunny_Shad0w1yrCommented:///:// : A lost once-unified ubiquitous civilization responsible for most of the problems of the Primordial World of Gincad and The Present Universe. They were the kindest individuals imaginable, with limitless numbers of creations, and yet... they have disappeared for nearly countless years. Regardless of their existence vanishing off the face of reality, traces of the once-prosperous civilization's influence remains deeply embedded in the darkest corners of this fractured universe.