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LazySatanixDevil
LazySatanixDevilAuthor2yrLazySatanixDevil

As Tradition of Most Webnovel Writers out there, I give my work 5 stars because... reasons after a long time of inactiveness I'm trying to get my groove back, so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can improve more, Thank you

Surviving as a Hidden Scp in the Foundation

LazySatanixDevil

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Polar_blue
Polar_blueLv14Polar_blue

i kinda ran out of patience to help edit the story after whole paragraphs began to make no sense. good try writing, but i reccomend getting an editor. use grammerly to help solve your grammer issues. its available on Google chrome.

LazySatanixDevil
LazySatanixDevilAuthorLazySatanixDevil

Thanks For the opinion, I do use Grammarly for it, but for an editor, I don't really know how to especially since I just write for fun, so I'm not sure I could get one, but thanks anyways

Polar_blue:i kinda ran out of patience to help edit the story after whole paragraphs began to make no sense. good try writing, but i reccomend getting an editor. use grammerly to help solve your grammer issues. its available on Google chrome.
Afonso_Aaron
Afonso_AaronLv5Afonso_Aaron

Hárèm ?

LazySatanixDevil:Thanks For the opinion, I do use Grammarly for it, but for an editor, I don't really know how to especially since I just write for fun, so I'm not sure I could get one, but thanks anyways
Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14Jackson_Alucard611

so is he evil now or neutral?

LazySatanixDevil:Thanks For the opinion, I do use Grammarly for it, but for an editor, I don't really know how to especially since I just write for fun, so I'm not sure I could get one, but thanks anyways
LazySatanixDevil
LazySatanixDevilAuthorLazySatanixDevil

Neutral at least for now

Jackson_Alucard611:so is he evil now or neutral?
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt

Psst yo can we get a historys strongest decipal marval mix fanfic where the mc is spider man befor he actually gouse Out to fight crime he takes a trip to japan and decides to stay a few years but He is a little more mature and will kill if absolutely necessary Tho they do understand there will always be a light and a dark side He got the bite the day befor The flight but sence he was fine he decided to go to japan anyway And the masters have a similar mind killing is wrong but sometimes its necicary The harem would be renka ma shigure and kisara marval side but have deapool Pop in and warn any marval girl not to cheat on his bro spidey or he will kill them

LazySatanixDevil:Neutral at least for now
Ur_Mom_Gay_lol
Ur_Mom_Gay_lolLv4Ur_Mom_Gay_lol

as tradition do you also abandon fic before it even lifts off?