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So far, I'm on chapter 108. The plot of story is interesting and the character build up is okay but I think it was not properly executed because of multiple grammar and spelling errors. The story could've been better if it was written correctly. Some(most) paragraphs are confusing because of improper pronouns used. Overall it was not that bad. But it could be improved

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Evil Duke, Please Be Gentle!

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thank you, i will try to seek help in editing as english is not my first language