Review Detail of TaintedMetal in PLEASE READ NOTICE

Overall a good novel with a fair amount of pacing. This novel actually shows you the sad state the MC is initially in prior to reincarnation, and we get a fair amount of build up following his reincarnation. Grammar is overall okay and it's straight to the point. The paragraphs in general can be spaced out. The content in them is fine but because they were all jammed bigger paragraphs it felt tiring to read. So hopefully future chapters can be space out thus giving easier reading experience. Also, one thing I never understood is why the MC is hated so much. I can understand how he came to be alone but why do some stories tend to make everyone a bad person literally like "shoo go away.", why specifically this MC and not other people who might be in the same situation as him? I mean, "unwanted" really needs a stronger reason than useless or weak in my opinion. Hopefully future chapters about the MC's new life can provide more understandable reasoning towards things like disliking people. But with the positive elements, maintain them, author, with the structure and pacing of the story.