Its good just the mc's personality is inconsistent it is always narrated as cold but he pats every girl that crying and girls fall in love with him at first sight
Frona_Gorgophone
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LIKEI will come back in the future it has so much potential though, it's just the personality that irked me. Good work author.
Frona_Gorgophone:Thank you for the honest review!đ
Novel with a harem of underaged little girl. And author deletes review if someone speaks the truth or gives low star
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I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." âMe I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.
Sagara_Sanosuke:Author would have deleted your review if you have given lower than 3 star. Without harem tag and deceiving people with intro and early chapters later making it another generic underage little girl catcher for harem.
Frona_Gorgophone:I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." âMe I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.
Nah. Why will I make one? Dude was just skimming my novel, concluding that mental age is the same as a physical age. (This is the case: MC is 56 y.o. very young looking man reincarnated to his younger selfâ16 y.o. Since he is of that age, of course, he will find himself among his peers. Due to unique charm, appearanceâof courseâand his "talent", many girls of his age are interested in him.) Not only that, dude also misunderstood every anime gigs I have written as the MC's journey to collect chicks like post stamps. All of that was done to lighten up the mood. It's very brief, you will only encounter them in a few paragraphs in every twenty or so paragraphsâI guess. It completely stopped after chapter 60 and further though. The plot has thickened, and "lightening up the mood" is no longer my priority.
OPRamenGuy:Is it a harem of underaged girls tho
Frona_Gorgophone:Nah. Why will I make one? Dude was just skimming my novel, concluding that mental age is the same as a physical age. (This is the case: MC is 56 y.o. very young looking man reincarnated to his younger selfâ16 y.o. Since he is of that age, of course, he will find himself among his peers. Due to unique charm, appearanceâof courseâand his "talent", many girls of his age are interested in him.) Not only that, dude also misunderstood every anime gigs I have written as the MC's journey to collect chicks like post stamps. All of that was done to lighten up the mood. It's very brief, you will only encounter them in a few paragraphs in every twenty or so paragraphsâI guess. It completely stopped after chapter 60 and further though. The plot has thickened, and "lightening up the mood" is no longer my priority.
Hmm... There is a high possibility it won't beâthere is already a fixed love interest. But, who knows? I'll let time show me the way I shall choose
yb48:so is this a harem? better a harem novel than a novel with an mc never interested in women,
Frona_Gorgophone:Hmm... There is a high possibility it won't beâthere is already a fixed love interest. But, who knows? I'll let time show me the way I shall choose
From the way I develop the story, it is highly likely no. The thicker the plot gets, the harder I find myself to insert romance inside the story.
GifflarGod:any update on that? will there be harem?
Frona_Gorgophone:From the way I develop the story, it is highly likely no. The thicker the plot gets, the harder I find myself to insert romance inside the story.
Frona_Gorgophone:I don't look at the stars you give, I look at the content. I don't care if you give me 1 star if you give me a valid point like this guy. But, yours didn't, mate. You are concluding the entire story based on your misconception from the first ten chapters (?). Next time, don't skim. Properly read it. If have any input in someone's work, make it as objective as possible. Don't hate someone's work just because it doesn't suit your taste. "If you are afraid to get dirty, walking away from a mud is better than dipping your feet in it. Raging right after you get dirty, because you decided the otherwise, is an act of a fool." âMe I hope you still have enough braincells to understand what I mean.