Review Detail of Ryu_Is_Charming in Love Is a Constant Survival

The story itself has potiental but it is ruined by terrible grammar and odd wording. Some characters speak in ways that do not fit their role. My score is based off the story and not the reading value. Nothing about the world is explained and things seem random and unnecessary. Characters have no flavor and change behavior a lot. These problems hold the story back. Fixing all of these problems would allow me to give me this story 4 stars at minimum.