It is well written with no major plot holes, or atleast I haven’t noticed them. It is worth a try atleast. Keep up the good work Author!
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LIKEDo you disagree? I enjoyed it, so I left a review on what I cared about. No major spelling problems, and no major plot holes that make me question why the Mc did something.
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ManasCiel:Do you disagree? I enjoyed it, so I left a review on what I cared about. No major spelling problems, and no major plot holes that make me question why the Mc did something.
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