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It was pretty good at the start…now I’m having doubts. In chapter 74 he pretty much gets a VR game, I was so excited when I started reading this and now I feel like it’s going to be more focused on this game, like so many other books, then his store and personal progress. I’ll keep reading for now but if it turns out to start focusing more on the game then Im just going to drop. This isn’t the only novel with this idea after all, will just read one of them if it become a vr novel. Im hoping it doesnt since its not in the tags but I’ll see ig.
The First Store System
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pinaka_:It doesn't. The story focuses on all the store products, his training, and things outside the store related to him.
Hey author, I’ve read till chapter 350 and I’m going to have to stop here. The story is just way to slow, 300+ chapters for 1 month. And it’s so repetitive, it’s the same thing over and over each day, 1-2 chapters of him being the shop owner, 1-2 chapters for new side characters, 2-4 chapters for training, 3-6 chapters for the game. 60% of the story is training/the game, 20% side characters, 20% working the shop.it’s just nothing really exciting/new since the event. Hes completed like 5 shop quests in 300 chapters. I’m just not willing to pay for more chapters if it’s going to continue to be this slow, I don’t know if youre trying ti make the story like 10000 chapters by writing this slow but it’s boring now. I’ve read slow stories before but this is in the top 3. 350000 words for 1 month of the story…at this point it just feels like you’re trying to take our money without giving us much.
pinaka_:It doesn't. The story focuses on all the store products, his training, and things outside the store related to him.
It's up to you, but you are close to the end of the first volume. Every customer in the story has a different story. I have never told anyone that the story is fast paced. It's how I write. Thanks for reading up to this point, if you decide against continuing further.
UnKnownEntity001:Hey author, I’ve read till chapter 350 and I’m going to have to stop here. The story is just way to slow, 300+ chapters for 1 month. And it’s so repetitive, it’s the same thing over and over each day, 1-2 chapters of him being the shop owner, 1-2 chapters for new side characters, 2-4 chapters for training, 3-6 chapters for the game. 60% of the story is training/the game, 20% side characters, 20% working the shop.it’s just nothing really exciting/new since the event. Hes completed like 5 shop quests in 300 chapters. I’m just not willing to pay for more chapters if it’s going to continue to be this slow, I don’t know if youre trying ti make the story like 10000 chapters by writing this slow but it’s boring now. I’ve read slow stories before but this is in the top 3. 350000 words for 1 month of the story…at this point it just feels like you’re trying to take our money without giving us much.