Review Detail of Dr_Dred in Star wars: New Order(DROPPED)

You know a general Synopsis would only help your story right? Also I see a lot of people complain that you should describe characters and what mc is doing, like what materials are being gathered, their properties exc…

It would help add some structure to your story and help people have a better idea of what to imagine, you don’t have to be overly detailed but something like he is tall, has Dark Black hair, Silver like eyes, Broad shoulders and a Decent face would give a good description of a character. Saying something like he is collecting a ore that can direct and absorb Electricity if processed right would be a nice flavor text for a material that could be used to make a counter for Sith Lighting