Review Detail of marichat_nettenoir in ACE OF HEARTS

Despite the relatively uneventful beginning and the grammatical errors made in this novel, there is a lot of room for improvement, and this novel has a lot of potential! Nikolas seems sweet, although I also do suggest you work on clarifying who's speaking - it gets confusing. Otherwise, I can't wait to see what happens in AOH moving forward, super excited! - mari <3