Review Detail of Ten_Bands in My System: An Evolved Computer I Made With My Unique Ability—
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it's as if a ten year old child wrote this. there are a few things wrong with it but what really makes it unreadable to me is how delusional the author is. its unrealistic that a government would name a group of people with supernatural powers the "superhero association" or what ever it's called. I actually wasted some time reading it hoping it would get better but it didn't. I also assume that the balance of power is highly unbalanced considering only one percent don't have powers but the police can't take care of one criminal. who's only motive I know for causing chaos is because he is perhaps bored? cause he thinks that even though he isn't a world class power that he can seriously get away with it? that's simply unreasonable and unrealistic. this whole novel is probably trash if the rest is anything like the first few chapters.
My System: An Evolved Computer I Made With My Unique Ability—
DaisukiDayoSenpai
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DaisukiDayoSenpai:This is a parody novel. Give it a break :) Hey, everyone's entitled to their own opinion and I'm not going to stop you. But if you're going to judge a book by the first chapter (literally by the cover), then at least give it a bit of thought. What's wrong with naming a group an association? None. And you just contradicted yourself. If one percent of the population didn't have a superpower, then surely the police are busy with a lot of high-class villains/criminals causing trouble somewhere else. There may be a lot of even worse crimes that the police and superheroes are handling that they weren't able to get to the scene in time. I can go through all the intricacies of a superhero world but then again, it's not like you'd care to listen.image
This is a parody novel. Give it a break :) Hey, everyone's entitled to their own opinion and I'm not going to stop you. But if you're going to judge a book by the first chapter (literally by the cover), then at least give it a bit of thought. What's wrong with naming a group an association? None. And you just contradicted yourself. If one percent of the population didn't have a superpower, then surely the police are busy with a lot of high-class villains/criminals causing trouble somewhere else. There may be a lot of even worse crimes that the police and superheroes are handling that they weren't able to get to the scene in time. I can go through all the intricacies of a superhero world but then again, it's not like you'd care to listen.
DaisukiDayoSenpai:This is a parody novel. Give it a break :) Hey, everyone's entitled to their own opinion and I'm not going to stop you. But if you're going to judge a book by the first chapter (literally by the cover), then at least give it a bit of thought. What's wrong with naming a group an association? None. And you just contradicted yourself. If one percent of the population didn't have a superpower, then surely the police are busy with a lot of high-class villains/criminals causing trouble somewhere else. There may be a lot of even worse crimes that the police and superheroes are handling that they weren't able to get to the scene in time. I can go through all the intricacies of a superhero world but then again, it's not like you'd care to listen.image
