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Sorry for my English it is not my native language. But what I wanted to say is that this work is frankly successful, in general after 200 chapters the novels no longer have any meaning, but this novel takes its time, I am at chapter 350 and the plot holds the road, some secondary characters like Maya and Kyle are unfortunately not exploited enough for very close friends in my opinion. The action scenes are well described, sometimes the events can be predicted and sometimes they are not. Overall I recommend reading the book, because objectively it is successful. But...i have a hard time with one thing, polygamy, i have a hard time with that genre because it totally devalues ​​female characters in novels, i find that polygamy will always limit the potential of female characters, because the one should not be too much above another in the heart of the MC, if one is above in the heart of the MC, it will just reduce the MC to the guy who is not satisfied with only one girl but has need a 2nd for his personal desires. The harem should only be used if you don't want a female character to develop as much as the MC. A harem like in SAO where just Kirito likes Asuna and stays friends with the rest of his harem is perfect, it allows Asuna to develop to the point where people prefer Kirito. To come back to Varian and Sia, the plot begins thanks to them, and FOR Sia, it would be a real shame if in the end she ended up on the same level as Sarah (whom I appreciate), when we understand that Varian likes Sia for years. Where I am he has known Sarah for 2 months but says "A world without Sarah would be empty", this sentence has in my opinion the potential to destroy the initial romantic plot which was mysterious and dedicated. In my opinion the best plot would be to persist on the plot of the hybrid by giving potential to Sia just below Varian and to see them grow up to 2 in the universe, like their childhood dreams and to make Sarah a "sister" to Varian using romantic drama, Varian who rejects Sarah upon realizing that it is Sia he loves. I don't know where the current story is but why not Evander who adopts Varian? To strengthen this bond which is not love but which is more than friendship. Conclusion, I wrote a lot I'm sorry, I offer ideas like that but you are the only feather in your story. I would like to know if the story is more about polygamy than monogamy. And I want to thank you dear author for your work!

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