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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv38mthLordShivaStories

Read all of the eight chapters and can say author is improving his craft, also the book has a lot of potential along with having an interesting plotline. Some parts fill scary. Now the negative some parts feel stiff like conversation and description. Don't fit many words in one paragraph try give space. Improve on the conversation and pacing. No hate just kept the opinion since you want to improve. I really think this novel has potential and I wholeheartedly recommend.

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An octopus's tale

daylightmoon123445

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daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1daylightmoon123445

Oh, my bad, I wrote it out, but didn't write add lol. I'll do it again :)

daylightmoon123445
daylightmoon123445Lv1daylightmoon123445

Thank you for your feedback, I will take that in mind next time I'm writing :)

LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv3LordShivaStories

welcome also you didn't gave me a rating

daylightmoon123445:Thank you for your feedback, I will take that in mind next time I'm writing :)
LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv3LordShivaStories

lol

daylightmoon123445:Oh, my bad, I wrote it out, but didn't write add lol. I'll do it again :)