Review Detail of Kiyoung in It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge

Item: It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

KiyoungLv42yrKiyoung

The novel had a lot of potential, sadly the implementation is not good enough. The MC is a hypocrite, mainly at the start. The writing style is 7/10 for me. Not good enough for this type of novel. The MC's personality needs improvement. The general personality of all the people need improvement to be honest. They're hypocritic. I'll be watching this novel, this has a lot of potential. Hope the author improves on the writing skills and the implementation of the story .

It Seems Like I Got Transmigrated Into An Eroge

Xeoz

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XeozAuthorXeoz

The characters are meant that way for a room of character development. And, I'm not pretty sure about the hypocrisy for the other characters, but I did make the MC a hypocritic. Anyway, thank you for the review.

2yr

Ouroboros001Lv11Ouroboros001

What a trash review. How are they hypocritical and have you heard of character development?

2yr

KiyoungLv4Kiyoung

Bruh... The author himself said that he made the MC a bit of a hypocrite, and as i said they need character development but the pacing is a bit slow.

Ouroboros001:What a trash review. How are they hypocritical and have you heard of character development?

2yr

Ouroboros001Lv11Ouroboros001

Can't edit, but on the first thing. I want to make it clear that what the author was saying was that he did that on purpose for character development. That's what I was trying to say.

2yr