Review Detail of Supremely_Innocent in I ENGRAVED YOU IN ME ( BL )

Because there is only 1 chapter, I won't give a low rating for the plot or anything. However, there could be some improvement in the writing quality. The synopsis could use more paragraphs/splitting. Not only that, chapter 1 - The Preamble could use some editing because the paragraphs look really strange. At the same time, the middle/ending of the chapter are just the lists of characters and these should go in the auxiliary chapters instead of the main chapters.