Review Detail of LordSatan666 in HP: Daniel King

ok im gonna be completely honest here it's got potential but there's a few minor issues I see you alluded to talents spent by points but you never concretely told us what those choices were which is a major thing I feel you need to do a flashback before the start of hogwarts and say what those are on top of that don't rush chapter endings if it's a little longer but flows better as a whole do it and your upload speed as long as you can do once a week and keep it on the same day you will have increased views on those chapters since structured releases see more traffic then sporadic releases