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OceanTourist
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At first, I only intended to read the first few chapters to write a fair review, but I just couldn't stop reading! This novel has an interesting twist on the very cliché lycanthrope-human romance story trope. The love interest is a beta instead of an alpha/top of the pack or omega/bottom of the pack. The female lead has relatable concerns. As a character she's a bit weak, but with potential for growth. I honestly prefer the male lead much more. He is so cute when he's possessive and worried over our female lead. Yet, he doesn't go absolutely crazy. He tries to respect the female lead's will. The story is fairly fast paced and there's never a dull moment. The first few chapters were a bit confusing (why were our leads so trusting?) but that is quickly explained (Not going to spoil how, so read to find out!). The author has a more detail oriented writing style, which some readers may not like. The world background is developing nicely (though a bit wordy at times). While the updates are fairly regular, the author has a tendency for run-ons and long sentences which can become monotonous. I would recommend chopping up the run-on sentences and varying sentence length. This would help make actually reading flow better.

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The Beta’s Mate

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Thank you so much for your input! I appreciate it. 😊