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Review Detail of DonaldSenju in In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)

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DonaldSenju
DonaldSenjuLv42yrDonaldSenju

Writing Quality (3 Stars): Easy to read, without too much grammar errors. Stability Updates (5 Stars): The author is publishing one chapter per day. Story Development (2 Stars): The MC got a system that gives him no challenge (in the first chapters he steals Garp physical strenght, already making him one of the strongest person in the world and this only continue until he becomes perfect stealing form all the other characters). The second system is a chat group where the MC choose to invite only females. I think most of the readers already understand where this story is going. Character Design (2 Stars) : The MC is showed to be weak willed, to the point of crying for a system or other type of 'external' help at the beginning of the story. After receiving the system he has a total change of personality, becoming more secure of himself and saying that he will kill all his future enemies. All of this happened a paragraph. Other than that his only interest is women, the first thing he does is invite only women in his chat group and in the first village he goes he flirts with the female bartender. World Background (4 Stars): The story has One Piece as main world, while the other avaible worlds are, Fairy Tail, Tokyo Revengers and Against The Gods (in this case universe). The total score is 3.2 Stars and it's only this high because i dropped the story after 5-6 chapters without giving it more chances.

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In The Multiverse With Two Golden Fingers! (Don't Read)

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BlackStar_BH
BlackStar_BHAuthorBlackStar_BH

Thanks for the honest evaluation, why don't you continue, I promise things will be completely different later...

DonaldSenju
DonaldSenjuLv4DonaldSenju

I will try

BlackStar_BH:Thanks for the honest evaluation, why don't you continue, I promise things will be completely different later...
BlackStar_BH
BlackStar_BHAuthorBlackStar_BH

thanks

DonaldSenju:I will try
maelvoid_2025
maelvoid_2025Lv4maelvoid_2025

So, did it get better or worse?

DonaldSenju:I will try
Layios
LayiosLv11Layios

Don't think so it got a bit worse than the beginning

SujAn
SujAnLv3SujAn

I was expecting Pokémon

StuckInTheInternet
StuckInTheInternetLv4StuckInTheInternet

Is the focus of this story on the plot or on how many women he can get ?. I'm not interested in reading generic Harem trash stories.

BlackStar_BH:Thanks for the honest evaluation, why don't you continue, I promise things will be completely different later...
Luthion
LuthionLv2Luthion

Estaba bien al inicio, pero fue empeorando cada vez más, y en lugar de entretener al público en general, se concentra más en ganar dinero por Patreon, ya tiene varios capítulos en patreon, pero no los sube y da excusas como no poder escribir, siendo que solo tiene que copiar y pegar. También los capítulos con cada paso del tiempo, se vuelven más aburridos y hablan de cosas sin importancia.

StuckInTheInternet:Is the focus of this story on the plot or on how many women he can get ?. I'm not interested in reading generic Harem trash stories.
GrimReeFer
GrimReeFerLv1GrimReeFer

Lol it's a generic mind controlled harem that took zero effort to get later.

maelvoid_2025:So, did it get better or worse?