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I am suprized that I liked it. Im curious how many resurictions there will be this book could be endless the way its writen. I read all the Updates in four hours im sad now. I feel like the Main caracters almost needed more Story of their old lives, yet they cant go back so to leasen the tramas it makes since they would make the Best of it it would be Best to forget. it kinda felt like a speed run reading bet if I had a quiz, I would proply butcher every name. especially the Main character, but I know her/him sinsirely loved lovers name ( not Telling read to find yourself). Their feelings are sweet and from just the Main pov, it would of made the temperary separation more sad if I knew how they both felt. setting background felt lacking in Detail but Was just a quick thought, the plot kept moving not a big Deal.oh sorry that was alot of spelling mistakes.

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The Erotic Misadventures of an Alien's Slave!

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Thanks for the feedback! Glad to liked it in the end. The rest of the story can be found on my website or Amazon. Sorry for cutting it off here, but I just don't get any revenue from WN. I tend to be light on detail in all my books. It's because I 'write for myself' if you see what I mean. That is, when I read books, I get bored by too much detail. I tend to fill in the blanks myself, so that's how I write too. If you liked this, try my other here on WN - The Misadventures of Black Alice - which is still ongoing. It's like this one, but not. :o Again, thanks for reading!