Review Detail of Serial_seresposa in Human Binary: The Unrivalled King of Technology

So, I enjoyed the way you introduced the world. I kinda felt like I was on a rocketship, overlooking the different worlds. In a way it was really cool I felt like a kid for a second but then another part of me got lost at certain places. I'm used to the cry of pain being 'Ah!' not 'Ha!' that confused me for a second. Then I saw you made a happy sound 'Ah!'... as I said that confused me. Then I noticed an error in continent and that's fine as it easily can be fixed. Then I wanted the story to go and not drag on but overall it's a good story. Looking forward to more.