One of the best I've read in the site- and it fits my tastes too! I can picture the scenes vividly as if I was looking into an image, and the prose capture me into the story like a book really should. The pacing is wonderful, with a balance mix of descriptions, narrations, and dialogue. Overall it was a very good read. Keep at it!
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