Review Detail of BlueBlueLemon in Cycle Of Nirvana

Often times it would be difficult to judge a cultivation story when there are only a few chapters posted. But the relationship between the protagonist and his father is somewhat unique to the take because often times it is a solo ride for the protagonist until later on. Since this is the first novel the Author wrote, there are more obvious mistakes. But all of it can be fixed and hopefully author will improve as more chapters are posted. An example is the use of "quotation marks". (You should be more careful where to place it.) The plot development is still little but it is there and I can see potential in it. Characters are also on the way to develop into something nice so it is something to look forward. All in all, it was a good quick read. Hopefully there are more in the future