Characters are boring, dialogue is terrible and the grammar is even worse. Whenever he starts writing in all caps to make the MC sound angry (i think? only reason i could think of) it just looks terribly cringe and edgy. Had potential, but all characters are so bland that its like eating good looking food that has absolutely no spice or taste.
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