Review Detail of TheNobleLion in Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

The inconsistency really bothers me. The MCs character fluctuates a lot, the tone of the novel also keeps changing, the focus of the story also changes. Illogical sequence of events seem to take place for no real reason. I also really don't like how the author continues to listen to and take in advice on plot points from the readers. That almost always ends badly and causes authors to lose sight of what they're writing. Whether the MC is good, neutral, or evil; consistency is important. Shame, I was enjoying the novel before so many of these eyebrow raising moments.