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SVCERVANTES
SVCERVANTESLv12yrSVCERVANTES

Good story you have here, I like the aura of mystery and confidence of the MC as if everything was part of his plan (Similar to Yasuo Zoldiack from HxH), I can only ask that you consider including Bellatrix lestrange as a love interest (You reduce him a little madness and you have a perfectly tamed yandere beauty), Hermione granger for their shared passions (Knowledge, discovering the truth and for lack of better words, her character and beauty) and Luna loovegod (For her calm, beauty and why she is a breeze fresh for anyone)

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Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

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SVCERVANTES
SVCERVANTESLv1SVCERVANTES

And while we are here, try to create your own organization and followers for the MC who follow the same ideals and knowledge as him (Illuminati version or something similar)

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TheVersalStudios
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I agree that the MC should create an Illuminati type organization, it would be fun and it would serve to protect the world from Harry Potter. Regarding love interests, do not be a pedophile friend. The MC takes Hermioni almost a decade and above all he is her teacher, otherwise everything is fine. If you are an adult and wrote this, consider staying away from schools and not being a teacher. The FBI is watching you.

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shillbear
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im pretty sure he just imagen the grown up hermoni

TheVersalStudios:I agree that the MC should create an Illuminati type organization, it would be fun and it would serve to protect the world from Harry Potter. Regarding love interests, do not be a pedophile friend. The MC takes Hermioni almost a decade and above all he is her teacher, otherwise everything is fine. If you are an adult and wrote this, consider staying away from schools and not being a teacher. The FBI is watching you.
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Arcane_mystic4RT5
Arcane_mystic4RT5Lv13Arcane_mystic4RT5

I hope your still reading …

SVCERVANTES:And while we are here, try to create your own organization and followers for the MC who follow the same ideals and knowledge as him (Illuminati version or something similar)
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Arcane_mystic4RT5
Arcane_mystic4RT5Lv13Arcane_mystic4RT5

Did you drop this ?

TheVersalStudios:I agree that the MC should create an Illuminati type organization, it would be fun and it would serve to protect the world from Harry Potter. Regarding love interests, do not be a pedophile friend. The MC takes Hermioni almost a decade and above all he is her teacher, otherwise everything is fine. If you are an adult and wrote this, consider staying away from schools and not being a teacher. The FBI is watching you.
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