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Suiyan
SuiyanLv122yrSuiyan

I took my time to finally read it, as I said I would before. Well, take this review with a grain of salt since I'm someone who doesn't like harem stories. Yes, my first issue is with the 'all girls are falling for MC' problem. That truly irritates me, but some people might like it. What about the mc's previous life friends? So far, only five years passed on Earth, right? How come only women keep appearing? Other than you typical villain men, the mc doesn't have a single friend of the same genre. It's all women, women, and more women. Is that even possible? At the very least, that was the case until the chapter I stopped reading. What about his real wife? Like, she is happy he came back... but that is all she feels... It's like she simply doesn't care at all about what happened in the last five years he was gone. It's all 'I'm happy he is back.' 'everything will be fine now that he is back' those are basically the only thoughts in her head. I thought she was supposed to be a much stronger woman after living the challenges of raising a kid five years alone. Suddenly, she became a broken doll out of nowhere. Last but not least, the descriptions. I truly can't emphasize with overly descriptive stories. I don't need to know how beautiful or run-down a place is to its minimal details. All I need to know is that it looks bad or good. Unless the description of a place or things like that is necessary for the story itself, all those detail are completely meaningless. I literally jumped at least 30 to 40% of the paragraphs in the chapters I read because I already knew that it was all a bunch of unnecessary words. I want to read a story, not an architecture project. Give, me, a, story! Of course, there were good points in the story too: Writing quality. It is definitely much better than my own books. Hahaha! I have nothing to complain in this department. Updates are fine too. They are consistent as far as I can see. This is definitely the point of a good author. The story itself had potential, at least when I read the synopsis. It really caught my eye... until the problems I mentioned appeared. PS: This last part is basically a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the author or the story. Anyway, the thing about Chinese names everywhere, including the cultivation world the MC came from. I mean, come on! What are the chances that the guy was Chinese and everyone in his world were all Chinese? The chances are ridiculously low, but that's exactly what happens. Remember, chances wise, that shouldn't be the case at all. As I said, this is just a personal taste. It has nothing to do with the story. If the author wishes that every single stone has a Chinese origin, it is fine.

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Back For My Daughter

HaoShu

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Suiyan
SuiyanLv12Suiyan

I totally agree

jesca1988:The main point why I read this is because of the MC's love for his wife and daughter doing everything for them to come back but if the plot changes and he will be in relationships with other women then the story lost its charm because the reason that readers like me read this is because of loyalty and love for his wife and daughter. Relationships with another women degrades his love that was shown in the first chapters.
HaoShu
HaoShuAuthorHaoShu

thank you for ur pointers I will definitely try to improve ame broaden my perspective of story, along with trying to improve it[img=recommend][img=recommend]

DoNt_TrY_mE
DoNt_TrY_mELv10DoNt_TrY_mE

Well sounds like Trash

Daoist_IMMORTAL
Daoist_IMMORTALLv3Daoist_IMMORTAL

oooof***

DoNt_TrY_mE:Well sounds like Trash
DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

my biggest hate for these parent types is they become harem. yes set an amazing example for tour kids by ficking any gild digger your way

Darah_Ciemhi
Darah_CiemhiLv13Darah_Ciemhi

Please can you recommend a good book to me without harem. I am so annoyed by all this harem novels though that's my choice and opinion. Can't they just have a good romance with only one beautiful lady ?

Jacobs_clan
Jacobs_clanLv14Jacobs_clan

Married to the Devil's Son Heart of Darkness Love at first night HellBound Flirtatious Princess Consort:.... -I can't remember the best of the Name... oye there are sooo many good ones. Sadly I have a terrible memory for titles... Millionaire Daddy Cherry Baby ? if you comment on this I'll try to write down the list of my favorites 😂 so I can reply with them.

Darah_Ciemhi:Please can you recommend a good book to me without harem. I am so annoyed by all this harem novels though that's my choice and opinion. Can't they just have a good romance with only one beautiful lady ?
Jacobs_clan
Jacobs_clanLv14Jacobs_clan

overly descriptive? Like "The Hatchet series" ?

Darah_Ciemhi
Darah_CiemhiLv13Darah_Ciemhi

thank you very much please do recommend more of your favorite ones🙂

Jacobs_clan:Married to the Devil's Son Heart of Darkness Love at first night HellBound Flirtatious Princess Consort:.... -I can't remember the best of the Name... oye there are sooo many good ones. Sadly I have a terrible memory for titles... Millionaire Daddy Cherry Baby ? if you comment on this I'll try to write down the list of my favorites 😂 so I can reply with them.
Jacobs_clan
Jacobs_clanLv14Jacobs_clan

Love at First Night, Boss how about a Marriage, My boss won't stop loving me, Princess's Priceless super Daddy (with baby cheery)

Darah_Ciemhi:thank you very much please do recommend more of your favorite ones🙂
Jacobs_clan
Jacobs_clanLv14Jacobs_clan

you should read The Crippled Boss Loves Me great family with a step mom that truly steps up to reunite & strengthen the family

DeathLingers:my biggest hate for these parent types is they become harem. yes set an amazing example for tour kids by ficking any gild digger your way
Jacobs_clan
Jacobs_clanLv14Jacobs_clan

here you go: The Crippled Boss Loves Me Married to His Secret Crush Till Death Do Us Part Law of Attraction Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard Blind Lover The Evil Consort of An Evil King comics: The Flirtatious Princess Consort The Crazy Adventures of a Mystical Doctor The Divine Doctor

Darah_Ciemhi:thank you very much please do recommend more of your favorite ones🙂
GodKingHuruu
GodKingHuruuLv2GodKingHuruu

-_-, I mean, ig they r good, but, I jus cant lik them for some unexplicable reason

Jacobs_clan:Married to the Devil's Son Heart of Darkness Love at first night HellBound Flirtatious Princess Consort:.... -I can't remember the best of the Name... oye there are sooo many good ones. Sadly I have a terrible memory for titles... Millionaire Daddy Cherry Baby ? if you comment on this I'll try to write down the list of my favorites 😂 so I can reply with them.
jesca1988
jesca1988Lv6jesca1988

The main point why I read this is because of the MC's love for his wife and daughter doing everything for them to come back but if the plot changes and he will be in relationships with other women then the story lost its charm because the reason that readers like me read this is because of loyalty and love for his wife and daughter. Relationships with another women degrades his love that was shown in the first chapters.

HaoShu
HaoShuAuthorHaoShu

of course, he will never be able to love them wholeheartedly since he knows that his reason to come here was that

jesca1988:The main point why I read this is because of the MC's love for his wife and daughter doing everything for them to come back but if the plot changes and he will be in relationships with other women then the story lost its charm because the reason that readers like me read this is because of loyalty and love for his wife and daughter. Relationships with another women degrades his love that was shown in the first chapters.
David_F365
David_F365Lv3David_F365

Doesn't I have multiple love interests, do you have any other recommendations??

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