Review Detail of HaoShu in Back For My Daughter
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A newbie at creating by myself if you like the story you can definitely like and vote. The story will give you the joy of having a daughter and the emotional bonding and love they share. Definitely will not make you cry but touch your heart. [img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp]
Back For My Daughter
HaoShu
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Empyrium:For a newbie writer you novel is quiet good, just hope mc won't be as arrogant as typical chinese mc. The start s really fast paced, could be a bit slower but overall your novel has potential, just a few grammer mistakes
Empyrium:For a newbie writer you novel is quiet good, just hope mc won't be as arrogant as typical chinese mc. The start s really fast paced, could be a bit slower but overall your novel has potential, just a few grammer mistakes
Ayanokoji_Kiyopon:So, in this harem is one where he has multiple love interests but will end up with one only?
Overlord69420:I just started reading it and like it. The only thing that it lacks from my point of view are the character discriptions like how they look, their hair colour etc
ByteZeroOne:can you pls tell me if there is, or would be an a*ult scenes with his wives?
hope u won't mind giving it a try, tho I have started editing all over again due to many grammatical mistakes[img=recommend]
ByteZeroOne:thank you for answer
nah, I don't really like reading this scenes, but without it, it's kinda bland for me, don't have anything against your work. maybe later my tastes would change and I would try, goodbye!
HaoShu:hope u won't mind giving it a try, tho I have started editing all over again due to many grammatical mistakes[img=recommend]
ByteZeroOne:nah, I don't really like reading this scenes, but without it, it's kinda bland for me, don't have anything against your work. maybe later my tastes would change and I would try, goodbye!
if you dont understand why i didn't like this scenes but wouln't read without them, the answer is romance - there is no better individual character development and romantic development for couple, scene, if done right, it's just what i found for me after readings many books
HaoShu:ohh
well I know the book has not good enough romance in first 50 chaps,but later it has been developed, u can try it till the free chaps, if u still don't like then ig I can only sigh đ¸
ByteZeroOne:if you dont understand why i didn't like this scenes but wouln't read without them, the answer is romance - there is no better individual character development and romantic development for couple, scene, if done right, it's just what i found for me after readings many books