Great Novel, but I dont think it quite captures the murderously obessive nature of Yandeers. A novel that does that far better is The Conquerors Path, but the conquerors path is weaker in terms of character and plot development, as the author tends to summarize events rather than explore them, especially in the beginning. In comparison, although I'd considered the ladies in the novel to be Yandeer-Light, the writing quality is far superior.Note to the author:I've never been into MonXSon *nc*st, but it's not a deal breaker for me as long as they are both mature consenting adults and the dad is a deadbeat sc*mb*g or dead. What I can't stand is character assassinating a previously good father, so the MC and readers don't have to feel guilty about the son betraying his father to steal his wife. That's f*ck*d up man, Leon deserves better than that, as you said multiple times, he was a good, hardworking, family man that sacraficed his own desires to put his family first. Such a man does not deserve to be cucked by his own son.
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