Do not put any money into this. After charging for chapters the writing style changes completely. The gender pronouns are fixed, it is now a disjointed mess. Suddenly you are expected to follow a bunch of people's perspectives and the story is lost fast. After the paywall the story you paid for is gone replaced by a hot mess. If you want a fun story of a mage with his quirky maids, then do not read this. A ton of overly complicated drama happens after a girl is captured that ruins it for no reason. It had potential and I will state that if it was not rushed the way it is now. It could be good; however, they did not do that. At this point from the point the princess enters the story it needs a ton of work. If it gets the work needed it could be great.
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