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Madara_Otsutsuki_
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Sorry, but i don't want weak mc. It doesn't even contain r- 18 and harem, so don't put in the tags to gain readers (i only read eight chapters but i peeked in the other chapters too and saw nothing that will keep me read this)

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Sunshine on Multiverse

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You_me_6195
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i think the author should change to meliodas because meliodas act like a kid

KasiCair
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This guy is right. During the first few chapters, the MC is weak as he doesn't yet have access to Sunshine. After he gets the access he acts like a moronic fool (I guess to add some humor to the story, at which the author is failing hard) and it makes it really but really hard to find the MC likable. Then there is his abysmal scheming. Example: He introduced himself to Annie under a different name than his real one. I just... when they enlist and meet Mikasa and Eren, his real name would naturally be revealed so why bother lying to her about that? Let's not even mention his utterly pathetic attempts at 'being arrogant' like Escanor. Just... no. The author would have had a much better plot and character development if he actually tried to be a teensy bit original. The writing quality is good though. The plot is... well, the decisions of the MC are not very good. He is not using his brain much... but the plot is fine so far if you ignore some nonsense like a mysterious old man appearing out of nowhere.