Review Detail of TBS_23 in My Idle Gaming System

Was looking forward to the story of Eckrit... A former champion who rebelled but his system, personality and story is boring... If the story had half the quality of I.M.I.T.A. I would stomach it because they are connected... The novel would have been better if it started when he was a fallen champion... What motived him to rebel against the primordials... Was interested in his USURP adventures a bit before he met Osmort... And how he changed after that... Early development could have been skipped and it wouldn't have affected the novel...Plus not every protagnist has to have a sad backstory... Maybe his parents could have died of old age because of lack of talent to progress further and increase their lifespan... Since it is important to the overall multiverse, if I was the author I would rewrite it to make it better...