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SomethingElse1
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Sucks, barely any character development or world building. First few chapters you can tell right away that world building is almost non existent. Character is bland and not very interesting. Plotlines are forced and so often played out in other generic novels. 'Blessings' are barely explained, rifts are barely explained, the world is barely explained. EVERYTHING IS BARELY EXPLAINED. Emotions are dead, all characters 1D. Yes, 1D. First time, I've reviewed a novel and judged characters as 1D because I don't know what's worse than 2D. Vocabulary and general writing skills? Non-existent, it isn't grammatical incorrect but the writing is at such a low level; I struggled to keep an interest in reading this. I didn't even realize I started skimming through the chapters because of the simplistic writing until I realized I was missing some minor details. Also too many redundant words and phrases used. Author google pleonasm. It's sometimes used by authors when writing in details but this novel doesn't have details, just poorly constructed phrases. I didn't realize this was written by the same author as Infinite Mana...or else I wouldn't have touched this. Somehow the author regressed in this novel making infinite mana better. That is pretty sad. Yes, I am being harsh only because it's a clear sign that this author refuses to improve in their skills, choosing to stay at level 1 forever.

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