Review Detail of Kenos_7242 in The Author's POV

Ah man, what a ride. The beginning was tough, i cant lie. Then at some point author had a favorite word "thereafter" and used it a LOOOOT but once that ends, its great. I wish there was more after the end, more ineractions between the characters but oh well. The last 100 chapters seemed a bit rushed but great nontheless. Im glad that author found a writing style he became comfortable with after a few chapter (quite a lot actually) story picks up after 40 chapters and the writing solidifies in the 100s.Spoiler ahead: Tbh, i was disappointed everyone had a happy ending. I really wished for everyone to realize there are actual consequences to war and their actions. Donna is the best, so i wished for a happy ending for her but she was forgotten. All in all, i recommend it