Review Detail of GR15AKLE in The Author's POV

As of chapter 54. So far, I like this a lot. It’s very reminiscent of “The novel’s extra.” Writing quality. From what I remember, pretty good. I can’t remember anything bad, although I wasn’t scouring the pages for mistakes either. Updating stability. Don’t remember. Should be good, considering authors in a competition. Story development. So far, the MC’s mentality has gotten more serious. All we know about most of the other characters is the description the MC gives upon seeing them. Character design. MC is a former 30 year old overweight author who became an orphan at the age of 14, got screwed over regarding scholarships, then became said author. Died of high blood pressure i think. He also couldn’t stand 10 plus minutes. Something I dislike is that he acts like a tourist in the story, which is also directly noted by another character. Its pretty annoying. Like, you literally created the story, and you can’t wrap your head around some of the stuff you see? He also seems to never really be serious. Thats where the comedy bit comes in I guess. Put simply, the comedy is mostly him taking other peoples shit. World development. Kinda meh, I didn’t really think anything was amazing. If anything, theres some things that don’t make sense. Something I take minor issue with is that while the story takes place in year 2055 or so, they still use Maglev trains, called “Air trains” in the story, and they haven’t advanced at all. Air trains are described as having an aerodynamic shape to reduce friction, as well as travelling slightly in the air, capable of travelling up to 600km/h. Thats basically a maglev. Thats basically it. There’s a lot of other things that I didn’t like, but they aren’t really detrimental to the story, and its probably just me being stupid.