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KjellTheViking
KjellTheVikingLv142yrKjellTheViking

I think it's cool you took inspiration from Vampire System, but you made it way way too similar my dude. I'd suggest reworking from the beginning.

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Shadow Assassin (Dual Attributes)

MarKD

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MarKD
MarKDAuthorMarKD

And... I should've added this but, I will try make it look like its not just copy paste mvs

MarKD:I do want to remake it from the beginning couple chapters but I don't have time. I just use the time when I have nothing to do for writing this novel.
MarKD
MarKDAuthorMarKD

I do want to remake it from the beginning couple chapters but I don't have time. I just use the time when I have nothing to do for writing this novel.

KjellTheViking
KjellTheVikingLv14KjellTheViking

All good man. Have fun with it then and use it as a story board. Flesh out ideas and when you have time take what you really like and use that in the new. erosion

MarKD:I do want to remake it from the beginning couple chapters but I don't have time. I just use the time when I have nothing to do for writing this novel.