On chapter 13, so halfway through at the time of me writing this review, and I’m gonna drop it right here. The story is following canon WAYYY too closely. I mean, literally 90% of the story stays the same, while like 10% is original. Also, the MC is just pathetic overall, not even being able to kill aliens who he just saw slaughtering humans.
Enigma_Black
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LIKEThese are not good times, people want blood, tin and spectacles. So if you want to write fan fiction, you need to write about a very cruel and bloodthirsty hero, a sociopath or a real psychopath. If you try to write something newer, lighter, well, the market is busy, I can't say that it will attract a large number of people.
Benoit_Valtin:I was about to start fanfiction, but I had the good idea to look at the reviews. Thank you for your comment which saves me from wasting time.
Enigma_Black:A valid review and entirely true, even if it's difficult to admit. That's the kind of fanfic I'm making so yeah.Thank you for your time though