Review Detail of Zeeshan_Haider_8466 in MHA : The New Spider

Dude if u were gonna make the story different from the original at least include that in ur synopsis. And learn to include the details, like one paragraph for everything in the UA entrance exam other than the physical test. And dude plz make the mc more lifelike. It's like he's some sort of robot during his training, like come on. If all ur trying to do is rushing into the part where he beats up people in this novel I suggest u try to learn how to actually learn how to write a novel.