Review Detail of Lazy_Ryuu in GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS

This fanfic is greater but it's no for me, yeah I like opmc and when I see the synopsis I was catch by it but the 4th chapter began to downfall for me, because. the "mc" gave both of his parent the future of him and making them know who he was. and it was huge turn off for me because why would he do that? because it's his parents? well he could just make both of them safe right? so why would he do that? there will be no time paradox because he controlled time itself, so he can secure that his other of him will not have a system, because he is "one" or Omnipresent you might say. the 3rd chapter was good because he become omnipotent being, he became the strongest being in the story so it will become good but.... it ruined for me I don't know if you guys like it. {[This is just my Opinion]}