Review Detail of atimOchisk in Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

I tried to get in to this but I can't it's filed with so much exposition that it's a bore to read through he monologs so much like at one point he spends three THREE sentences talking about climbing a tree it's ridiculous so much can be cut out but it's not and the only reason I can think of that it's not is cuz he is padding the story with usless detail to make it to 5k words per chapter here is some wisdom for you show don't tell you keep telling us all this stuff that isn't important at the moment so there is no story to pull a reader in