Review Detail of Kenrio in Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

Item: Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

KenrioLv102yrKenrio

many things make me stop liking this fic. the first I the poorly choice of making mc a captive so you can limit his strength so when he reach earth he is not extremely op. second is how you choose to make him have 3 identy (civilian,hero and villain) extremely put of by a Sayan that care about the law of the world ( without counting how troublesome and painful for his friend that trusted him when it will be it's discovered, yes it will be discovered one day). third is what made me hate this completely you gave the mc the goal to go to the DB universe again. why would I waste my time in reading a novel that in the future mc will go to a world I'm extremely bored to read so much fanfic about(the one you write for example is from there so making mc go to that place when you have already a fic about it is weird).

Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)

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Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.

2yr

DaoisteTvqwULv2DaoisteTvqwU

nah they're pretty even

Demiurge_Ohara:reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.
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2yr

DIORYENIS_PERALTALv1DIORYENIS_PERALTA

bro, what?, so what im getting out of this idiotic comment is that you dont like these types of stories, also having the character want to return to the place he was born and raised in, is a good motive, and if his friends do find out about his identity then that's reason for conflict, which is good. Also saiyans DO follow laws, they have a king which GIVES them laws. So, apparently you just like stories where everything goes well for a character, which is, in all honesty, bad taste.

2yr

DaoisteTvqwULv2DaoisteTvqwU

dude your taste sucks

2yr

DaoisteTvqwULv2DaoisteTvqwU

you do know that he would have been weaker if he wasn't captivated

2yr

DaoisteTvqwULv2DaoisteTvqwU

but they definitely have different laws than we do like equal rights because I have a feeling that most saiyans are just two sets of DNA from different saiyans combined in a cloning machine

DIORYENIS_PERALTA:bro, what?, so what im getting out of this idiotic comment is that you dont like these types of stories, also having the character want to return to the place he was born and raised in, is a good motive, and if his friends do find out about his identity then that's reason for conflict, which is good. Also saiyans DO follow laws, they have a king which GIVES them laws. So, apparently you just like stories where everything goes well for a character, which is, in all honesty, bad taste.

2yr

DaysideLv12Dayside

Saiyans follow SAIYAN LAWS. Not laws made by these weak humans that aren't even all that smart. Absolutely ridiculous

2yr

Charlie_SowernLv2Charlie_Sowern

I dare you say that to Batman.

Dayside:Saiyans follow SAIYAN LAWS. Not laws made by these weak humans that aren't even all that smart. Absolutely ridiculous

2yr

G1LGAMESHLv13G1LGAMESH

The humans he meant was the humans from DBZ you foking donkey.

Charlie_Sowern:I dare you say that to Batman.

1yr

goku95Lv4goku95

The is to beta if girls want him he should have gone with it instead of wishiwashing it saying Kara will be ok with it instead still dragging it I will say waste of sayen

1yr

AsianLadyBoyLv11AsianLadyBoy

nope the author literally says that the MC would of course be weaker because he was captive. He was tricked when he let himself be fought because the guy knew that he was lying the whole time.

DaoisteTvqwU:you do know that he would have been weaker if he wasn't captivated

1yr

King_RyconLv1King_Rycon

That's That's fan animation, why are you treating it like its some sort of Official publication?

Demiurge_Ohara:reverse flash smacked B. guko six ways sunday.
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1yr

Demiurge_OharaLv5Demiurge_Ohara

Dude. it's Dc comics, death battle fused MOST of R. Flash's feats into one burrito

King_Rycon:That's That's fan animation, why are you treating it like its some sort of Official publication?

1yr