Review Detail of ColiJiyo in The Eidolon and I

Item: The Eidolon and I
Rating: 4

Review detail

ColiJiyoLv11yrColiJiyo

The character was ok for me, didn't really fancy their names. I enjoyed the pacing and the flow of words. It was comfortable to read. I think this book have potential, gotta keep an eye out for more updates in the future.

The Eidolon and I

Jolan_Hildebrandt

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Jude_K_1656Lv10Jude_K_1656

Lance actually good name for his character which means: the Spear of Destiny

1yr

Jolan_HildebrandtAuthorJolan_Hildebrandt

Yeah thats the third time for the names....better change them

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ColiJiyoLv1ColiJiyo

:P sorry bout that.

Jolan_Hildebrandt:Yeah thats the third time for the names....better change them

1yr

Jolan_HildebrandtAuthorJolan_Hildebrandt

Don't be. Was it all the names or the main characters?

ColiJiyo::P sorry bout that.

1yr

Jolan_HildebrandtAuthorJolan_Hildebrandt

you helped and I thank you

ColiJiyo::P sorry bout that.

1yr

Jolan_HildebrandtAuthorJolan_Hildebrandt

come to think of it the names rubbed me the wrong way too

1yr

ColiJiyoLv1ColiJiyo

I guess that is fair, "Lance". But I think the author need to brainstorm abit more. To find a better fit in the world the MC resides in.

Jude_K_1656:Lance actually good name for his character which means: the Spear of Destiny

1yr