Review Detail of 9niru in The Genius Mage

This sorry started out so nicely but.. 1. The male character is always changing his genre from female to male 🤦‍♀️ 2. The grammar started giving me headaches, this story really needs a proof reader 3. The fast pacing created so many holes in the story and world building, that I lost.. The father is gone somewhere, the spirit is gone, the mother is isn't that important anymore 4 character development stagnated, because of the fast pacing most likely Great story, a lot of potential will see how it will go