9niru
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9niru2yrPostedThis sorry started out so nicely but.. 1. The male character is always changing his genre from female to male 🤦♀️ 2. The grammar started giving me headaches, this story really needs a proof reader 3. The fast pacing created so many holes in the story and world building, that I lost.. The father is gone somewhere, the spirit is gone, the mother is isn't that important anymore 4 character development stagnated, because of the fast pacing most likely Great story, a lot of potential will see how it will go
- 9niru3yrCommentedCh 60 Chapter 60 - The 'Sincerity' of the Goblins
- 9niru3yrCommentedCh 2 The System
- 9niru3yrCommentedCh 18 A Night Walk
- 9niru3yrCommented
I am. Dropping this. This is nonsense. A wolf turned poor puppy
Chuckling a bit Annette made a gesture telling Ark to follow her as she proceeded to walk towards the mansion, what she had just used was a sort of magic called charm magic, this magic worked wonders when it came to influencing peoples thoughts and desires, this magic could only be used by women though since men weren't able to for some reason. This magic was often used to seduce people, but it only worked on people who didn't have a will and mind that was strong enough. Of course this was also relative to the mages power. - 9niru3yrCommented
Just why you go wolf..
After having said that Annette studied the wolf for its reaction, at first it looked a bit frozen and like it was pondering, but then suddenly it looked really happy as it gazed upon her and madly nodded it's head a couple of times. This made Annette really happy, she even broke out into a smile, which she almost never did.