The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. Although there are grammatical mistakes, they can be improved with the time. As they say 'Practice makes the man perfect'. But no doubt, this story has great potential. I love the smooth flow and especially the MC and her personality. I recommend everyone to read it at least once.
Scourgie
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LIKEScourgie:thank you very much for the feedback back! I will try to be more attentive with the grammar!image